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Submission Name: Twilight dots

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Author:	endlessgame23
ASL Info:	25/f/The Endless Table
Elite Ratio:	3.22 - 28/42/44
Words:	14

Class/Type:	Haiku/Nature
Total Views:	1106
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	93

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Twilight dots

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At Heaven’s collapse
Gaia sighs, trembles
And meets the Sun

Submitted on 2017-06-26 10:08:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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The sea of night ,
Fell, back
caught by the
morning-star

teika5...... Has been touch
| Posted on 2017-07-16 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
Nicely done. I read your other postings also. I like what you are doing.

Jim
| Posted on 2017-06-28 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.