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    dots Submission Name: Twilightdots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
    Total Views: 505
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 93



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    dotsTwilightdots
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    At Heaven’s collapse
    Gaia sighs, trembles
    And meets the Sun




    Submitted on 2017-06-26 10:08:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The sea of night ,
    Fell, back
    caught by the
    morning-star

    teika5...... Has been touch
    | Posted on 2017-07-16 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
      Nicely done. I read your other postings also. I like what you are doing.

    Jim
    | Posted on 2017-06-28 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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