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    dots Submission Name: Relapsedots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    For a moment,

    I didn't care.
    I didn't feel the burn of the moon.
    I didn't feel tears on my face.

    I was at peace for a second.

    Then they spoke the evil words again.
    The words that drove me to this insanity.
    The words that keep me from sleeping.

    No,

    I refuse to drown again.
    I refuse to let you put your hands on me.
    I will not fall again.

    I can say that all I want,

    You know they aren't true though.
    You know I'm always yours.
    You know I'll always love you.

    Just hope this time I don't the ground so hard.











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