Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Relapsedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 5/109/125
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 136
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 779



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsRelapsedots
    -------------------------------------------


    For a moment,

    I didn't care.
    I didn't feel the burn of the moon.
    I didn't feel tears on my face.

    I was at peace for a second.

    Then they spoke the evil words again.
    The words that drove me to this insanity.
    The words that keep me from sleeping.

    No,

    I refuse to drown again.
    I refuse to let you put your hands on me.
    I will not fall again.

    I can say that all I want,

    You know they aren't true though.
    You know I'm always yours.
    You know I'll always love you.

    Just hope this time I don't the ground so hard.











    Submitted on 2017-06-30 01:34:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Roof, Roof.
    | Posted on 2017-07-11 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201823

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Lana written by keestu
    Holding Hands written by yesmole
    Resistance written by jackz
    Gods and Monsters written by TheJadedCritic
    Love is divine written by Ramneet
    The Supreme Court written by poetotoe
    Relapse written by ForgottenGraves
    The Eternal Moment written by endlessgame23
    Prone written by Daniel Barlow
    Virtual Reality Star written by endlessgame23
    Murderers Manifesto written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Temporal Displacement written by endlessgame23
    lost in translation written by robbie
    Holding on to Intent (working title) written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Luck written by MistidLovelac
    Ritual Hunger written by endlessgame23
    Oasis written by Crestfallenman
    Do You Think You Know Me? written by rev.jpfadeproof
    A weight of the World written by teika5
    365 Days written by jackz
    Ash written by MysterydarkPoet
    Scorpio written by endlessgame23
    To the Voice of Antebellum written by HisNameIsNoMore
    lost in translation written by robbie
    Always to My Left written by endlessgame23
    Proactive written by SincerWritinAsh
    static high written by teika5
    Warm fuzzy "no" written by teika5
    Independence Day written by endlessgame23
    The Unwanted New Life written by jackz

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry