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    dots Submission Name: lost in translationdots
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    Author: robbie
    ASL Info:    20/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 53/54/36
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 807
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       my inspiration is in my mood im in and the time and place I write to get my feeling out because I have no one else to share with or cant find the right words to use any feed back is welcome


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    I work my fingers to the bone
    just so you can sit on a throne
    I spend hours away
    and in the end all you can say
    is you were right and I was wrong
    in between your hits from the bong
    my son and I accepted you
    and we changed too
    just to adapt to who you are
    little did we know your a drunk at the bar
    I told you id work to take care of us all
    on my dollar you kill it and have a ball
    no care to what I say
    you will party in your own way
    as I work my fingers to the bone
    you yell at me and cast another stone
    get me to the point that I raise my voice
    push me to where I have no choice
    if left to you we would party every night
    to me that is a real sick sight
    so different do we see life
    but yet we're together thru all this strife
    as I work my fingers to the bone
    I still let you sit on the throne
    scared to rise and scared to chose
    so much sacrifice, so much time to lose
    but its almost to that point I have to
    my son and I or a life with you
    thru the fog my choice is clear
    and the end of us is near






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      They say love is blind, unassuming, and without expectations. One thing I've found over the years though, is that love from parents is very rarely any of these things. In some cases, I think, marriage becomes this refinement of the blame game. A veiled kind of treaty where surreptition and subtlety reign king and queen. And children become this second chance at all the failed relationships, all the expectations one wasn't able to live up to bundled up. Slowly, it all becomes a transference of fault. Children fail; they're unable and inept born into a whole new world. They fail and fail until finally they stop failing, and for most, that's the point when they become adults.

    But sometimes parents become myopic: Is the child failing by their own actions or because of the parent? Where does the blame fall? It's fairly easy on some levels. If the child goes hungry, the parent has failed. If the child gets mixed up in a dangerous situation, the parent may have failed. But if the child is unhappy? Who is at fault? Love doesn't have a care for blame. Nobody is at fault. Yet somebody, somehow must be held accountable. And somehow, nobility is always at play.
    | Posted on 2017-07-01 00:00:00 | by Outlaw | [ Reply to This ]


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