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    dots Submission Name: Luckdots

    Author: MistidLovelac
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       Just a poem about me having the worst luck

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    Lost my heart
    Hope to die
    No such luck
    I continue to live
    I wonder why
    Is this hell
    It really seems to be
    So many bad things
    Keep happening to me
    The world is so ugly
    People are so mean
    It doesn't seem fair
    It seems kind of normal to me
    Life started pretty bad
    I lived on my own,
    It just got worse
    I don't believe in hocus pocus
    But I believe I am cursed
    I would like to be positive
    I would like to say it will get better
    I know it will only get worse!

    Submitted on 2017-07-01 22:54:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I would suggest you to remain positive and try to see positivity even in negativity. Pain and adversities have their own lessons to teach. Tough times makes you more strong and more virtuous.
    | Posted on 2017-08-06 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, how it is to be sick and tired of being sick and tired. Some how I been in that place where time just did not seem fair. Everyone going about their busyness, mange-ing to wear a fortified mask. No-matter , IN you work you express a huge amount of the f-it's . Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-07-08 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]

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