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    dots Submission Name: Scarsdots
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    Author: MistidLovelac
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 1/1/2
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       I survived rape, for a while I cut myself to escape the pain. I have been lucky to heal over time, I learned to forgive these weak pathetic men. I'm stronger because of it.


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    I break a razor
    I grab the blade
    I run it through my skin,
    Careful not to get too close
    to my veins.
    I'm not trying to kill myself,
    I do not do it for attention!
    I do it to ease my pain.
    The blood flows,
    I sit and watch
    Sometimes I swirl it around.
    I am euphoric now,
    I'm in a better place.
    I'm obsolete,
    I've wondered away
    From the pain I couldn't take.
    Superficial scars.
    Scars don't bother me
    I'm no beauty queen
    My issues go way beyond these scars.
    When I became a teen men started to notice,
    And pay attention.
    At first they said things,
    Then came the touching,
    Then they became very aggressive.
    They saw me through their eyes,
    They wanted me.
    They became predators
    I became prey.
    They watched from afar
    They waited patiently.
    They found their chance,
    To rape this young, innocent girl.
    They took her innocence away.
    Now she sits in a bathroom covered
    In her own blood.
    They left the real scars
    So she uses cutting to try to take
    The pain away.
    Self inflicted scars ease the pain.
    She doesn't hide the scars,
    It was the rape that caused her shame!




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