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    dots Submission Name: Virtual Reality Stardots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 569
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 463



    Description:
       And we will be married on 9/23/3301
    Not a cyber romance, well yes, but no. not real people falling in love with each other and over coming the distance via internet.
    about a human who has auditioned to be on the latest (virtual) reality tv show..
    where a virtual A.I. is supposed to choose between different contestants.


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    dotsVirtual Reality Stardots
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    I am a human...

    in love with a ghost
    of pixels and programs
    Artificial intelligent romance..

    And I wonder if he will ever be...

    A robot in love with a Human
    Devoted to thought and emotion..

    And I wonder if we will ever be free
    of this Soul crushing romance.

    I am a Human
    in love with..

    I am a Human
    in love without
    a chance.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Cyber love is as real as toast, Though what I think may not make the romance, The computer world is a love afire , that move at electric speeds,
    So, the real love afire would be the hows' we are in love with our ability to use the different life source . WE made this afire to be entertaining so we make or beak up , with it, <or excuse me> this Cyber love afire
    Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-08-31 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]


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