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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2124/2081/1578
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       
         there is a magnet stuck on my fridge.
         after several years i have yet to see
         the dratted thing fall off.

         
         in this sense, too, i remain only what i am.
         the swooping. center-stealing.
         fall.

         the pall: of where i am
         in relation to where
         you r


    is.      a luckless sensitivity.

         a truth
         a gateway



         magnets don't give out.                          they don't.







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                                                                                                             the position of words.
                                                                                                             and its influence on
                                                                                                             how they relate their
                                                                                                                                                meaning.




                                                                                                                                                                                                            the way gravity forces
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      water into a curve


                                                                                                                                                                                                            

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          this is my only inkling


























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      misc misc
    | Posted on 2017-08-08 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]
      
                   spiritually
                   i am a gateway

                   

                        i open to you
    | Posted on 2017-07-17 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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