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Devil's Presents (Gift wrapped number One)

Author: endlessgame23
ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28 /42 /44
Words: 182
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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An Anthology of whispered prayers
from the cracked lips of angels.
God Bless all the little children.

Devil's Presents is a series that is very close to my heart.
I don't mind critique, but please use a light hand :)

Devil's Presents (Gift wrapped number One)

Chapter One

It's only just beginning, Darling..

He, a man with a musical voice.
You were alone.
Confession in your presence
And myself.

I think for the day
Tomorrow adjourned.
There was a little stir
Into his chambers..

Chapter Two


He echoed the heart to his wife.
He brought out a cigarette.
Nothing that he gives, the same or even.

This was the last week of July.
The last month, she had been bulging.

All the running around..

He reflected… Relief.

As usual they were looking for.

Merciless Hunt
Possible suspect:
No alibi
Looking: very tired

Chapter Three

Isn't it FUNNY?!

Some of the girls hunt.

The girl disappeared.
They hunted her.
She’s pretty.
The great, big room echoes..

She was grabbed.

She’s not there.

Somewhere, Baby.


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  I like to think that the "devil's presents" are a natural progression created with the dynamic progressiveness of coordinated interjection. A relatively positive integration in time. Power is a problematic diversity matrix whose climax resembles the apotheosis of zoomorphic zoolatry's social contiguities on the demagoguery. Elan-vital's orthogenesis overtures incarnate. I like your stuff, it makes me think!!!!!!

| Posted on 2017-09-26 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
  The arrangement of the small story. A inventive way to go about it .
The Devil Presents Gift #1 , we notice that time line July , was the gift.

I guess the new parents , were new to everything .
Thinking of how this arrangement is , it's choppy but flows
wow, the mind set for this quite different.

" I like it," said Teika5
| Posted on 2017-07-21 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]

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