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    dots Submission Name: Hope sustains lifedots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 262/106/50
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHope sustains lifedots
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    Hope sustains life

    Hope is force.
    Hope is energy.
    Hope is strength.
    Hope is life.
     
    Hope for equality.
    Hope for empathy.
    Hope for justice.
    Hope for life.
     
    Hope for serenity.
    Hope for tolerance.
    Hope for harmony.
    Hope for life.
     
    Hope for peaceful world.
    Hope for promising world.
    Hope for forgiving world.
    Hope for lively, lovely and loveable world.




    Submitted on 2017-07-23 23:24:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A nice way to start each day is to exercise your sense of hope.

    Simply put, faith with positive expectations.

    Nice way to form your universe.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2017-07-31 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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