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    dots Submission Name: Rehabdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    I haven't been sleeping lately.
    My mind has been racing,
    I don't know what I'm chasing.
    If I don't keep on praying,
    On my dead momma I'm relapsing.

    Now no one one wants that.
    I'm a crack smoking, meth snorting, mushroom eating, excasty taking addict.
    Now wait a minute, I'm not done yet.
    I'm a alcoholic, pill popping, coke sniffing, weed smoking advocate.

    Now tell me I'm nothing,
    light a fire under my ass.
    Ill show you something.
    Writing is a therapy session for depression.

    Im out here trying to send a message.
    If I can do it, any one can too.
    No excuses, this battle is not for the weak hearted but it all worth it I promise.




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      I like the rawness of this. The truth you speak of being an addict and the fine tipping point in recovery.
    | Posted on 2017-09-07 00:00:00 | by Poetic_tragedy6 | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with all that, It's a battle front for the will, and it's not won by being weak , and avoiding the issues , even if it stuck in your ass. I believe that you pice starts like a therapy session , then it goes south towards the grit . that's fee speaking your mind poetry .
    Keeping right is sometimes a struggle , but, people like that sort of thing .
    teika5
    | Posted on 2017-08-25 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]


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