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    dots Submission Name: Unselfishdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    dotsUnselfishdots
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    When I write, I don't it for the likes.
    I don't do it for the acknowledgement.
    I do it for the person alone.
    In house that is not home,
    With cold steel pressed against the dome.

    That feeling is all to familiar
    Drowning in thought of suicide.
    Welcome to the darkest hour

    Soft spoken and hesitant,
    I put the pen to paper and let the ink bleed in.
    It speaks with the passion of a thousand men.




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