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    dots Submission Name: All cause of youdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
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    dotsAll cause of youdots
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    A smile hides what the eyes conceal.
    The pain is temporary, but the memories of you are forever lasting.

    I'm not afraid of the dark,
    I'm scared of the silence.
    I'm not afraid of you,
    I'm scared of my conscious.

    I'm not afraid of love,
    I'm scared of a mistake,
    I'm not scared of death,
    I'm scared of my fate.

    I lied, drank and even cheated,
    Manipulated become a addict and abused.
    The only place I wanted to be,
    Was the headliner of the obituary news.
    All cause I woke up to the memory of you.




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