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    dots Submission Name: Comedydots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I started to play guitar again to get off my diagnoses
    Had an aggressive spastic moment with my husband and he broke the guitar
    I'm not mad at him I'm mad at myself
    And the guitar
    I've considered gluing it together
    Glad thoughts these,
    Gooping on putty
    The guitar no that's not realistic
    Get over it
    Pray for a better guitar
    Pout and feel guilty
    Get over it finally
    See what's next

    Submitted on 2017-07-30 22:25:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like hoe you dug into the subject, your writing is like a Charle Brown theme , the Great Guitar Thats now broke,, You really sober me up,
    My favorite part was ,How the gluing the Thing would not fix it, It seem to be a deciding moment in the abstract
    | Posted on 2017-08-31 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
      My ex wife once attacked me with her sisters guitar while she was trying to kick me in the crotch at the same time. It was a feat but I managed to get the guitar away from her and dodge getting kicked at the same time. Did I get thanked, no, she called the cops because I pushed her in the process and she fell down and hurt her arm against the coffee table. We all have our moments. Get over it....pray for a better guitar. LOL

    | Posted on 2017-07-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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