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    dots Submission Name: A Tounge Lashing dots
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    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ artesia ca
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 38/9/16
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 204
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    Bytes: 628



    Description:
       The pile of words , is some rant. it's intended , to present a <Thing>some people do. Like over selling themselves, or, making it more than it is.


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    dots A Tounge Lashing dots
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    Most of the time , I spend talking with someone
    Is spent in time of reflection too.
    <or>
    some kind of moral action
    ya , know --
    <the one of greetings>

    and still-- I count those moments
    wondering/?/ is it's ( now ) my turn to talk

    How many subjects, are you talking in/?/

    Then it strikes me!
    This might be an public address/

    Because , I lost track of your subject's
    Subject'<S>! !
    all i can say for sure,, is -
    ,"I got to Go."





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