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The Devil Loved Me


Author: endlessgame23
ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28 /42 /44
Words: 179
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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The Devil Loved Me



Oh, how I miss you
Lord of my every thought
My body cries out to
have you back inside of me

"it is forbidden"
whisper of my soul
But Gods, I am weak
I cannot fight
I lose control

I put you in my mouth
and set you on fire
Breathe in deep
give into desire

I am lost in the
throes of pure addiction
Numb to the consequences
of my fatal affliction

Can't live without
that burn on my lips
Hopelessly devoted to
Death between my fingertips

Black, viscous Love
at the back of my throat
alive, bitter, vile
one breath and I choke

King of smoke and ash
I am your slave
worshiping you
as I dig my grave

Gift of the Godking
Cancer of my every cell
dearest, Darling Nicotine
May we burn together in Hell




Submitted on 2017-08-02 07:02:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  There is many thoughts within this way , a love that is forbidden .
An, yet It rings with me , this part , king of some and ash ,
I am your slave
worshiping you
as I dig my grave.
Why is this so important
it tells' the tail
letting us into
the spell

Teika5
| Posted on 2017-08-15 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
  There is many thoughts within this way , a love that is forbidden .
An, yet It rings with me , this part , king of some and ash ,
I am your slave
worshiping you
as I dig my grave.
Why is this so important
it tells' the tail
letting us into
the spell

Teika5
| Posted on 2017-08-15 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
  Yet another "wow" from you! While it was understood after a few lines what your poem was about...it took on a different appeal (symbolism?) almost as quickly. It sounded almost sexual...and erotic. Cigarettes sounded almost human...they sounded like sexual partners (filling your desire).

Well written and thought provoking (is smoking sexual?)...

thanks for sharing...and now I need a cold shower :) lol

Kelly
| Posted on 2017-08-03 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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