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    dots Submission Name: Whispereddots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 27/40/41
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhispereddots
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    Rock-a-by babies

    rocked by earth quakes

    volcanoes nonstop

    storms winds bellow

    the air dense and hot

    when the Dome breaks

    the Waters will fall

    Goodbye to Creation

    Destruction of all




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      Now , now holy -shit , has too much to say with you . The song is not a good one though I was only honest saying i like the base of the truth of it ,. It reminds me of the proper way to wait for Earthquakes ,<under a bridge> . The simmering of your mind is a turn on , with those fires burning into a song , ,, Teika5,,
    | Posted on 2017-08-07 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]


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