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    dots Submission Name: Whispereddots

    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Rock-a-by babies

    rocked by earth quakes

    volcanoes nonstop

    storms winds bellow

    the air dense and hot

    when the Dome breaks

    the Waters will fall

    Goodbye to Creation

    Destruction of all

    Submitted on 2017-08-04 15:24:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Now , now holy -shit , has too much to say with you . The song is not a good one though I was only honest saying i like the base of the truth of it ,. It reminds me of the proper way to wait for Earthquakes ,<under a bridge> . The simmering of your mind is a turn on , with those fires burning into a song , ,, Teika5,,
    | Posted on 2017-08-07 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]

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