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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2124/2081/1578
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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                                                                no kind of guy
                                                                you want to know

         




                             anymore
                   

                   
                                                 i was - so long coming to it
                                                 it was breathtaking -actually
                                       how quickly it was i fell
                                            over











                                                                                                             you know?

         


    to the dark side.





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      ok, how did you get that red paint to say , Redrum, and is it your you way to use web paper in such a way , that is very colorful and the suspense in one of a kind , I like how i was transported to a hotel room , then nodded on the wall, only to find myself there ,
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