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    dots Submission Name: a leaf of shadow and edgedots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2121/2077/1562
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsa leaf of shadow and edgedots
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                        * and she is nothing.
                        * no person.
                        * a tiny little thing___
                        * half hair
















                        * the full of her pain

         



                        * Doped down by opioids






    Submitted on 2017-08-07 16:36:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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