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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2128/2085/1589
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 547
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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         and you spun round, boo,
         like some fifteen million. 4-twenty (five) thousand view
         5 year old, 51k like.
         record i had just discovered
                                       
                                                                                    new
         
         to me though





    Submitted on 2017-08-08 19:52:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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