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    dots Submission Name: dots

    Author: Daniel Barlow
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          like sticks of glass
         bending to keep apart great tonnages of rock
         it's not like i'm inclined toward
         any fatality


    the wait will kill me

    Submitted on 2017-08-08 20:41:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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                                                 without death

                                                 without end.
                                                                     without edge


         life could find no shape

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