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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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          like sticks of glass
         bending to keep apart great tonnages of rock
         it's not like i'm inclined toward
         any fatality

         

                                            however
    the wait will kill me





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