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    dots Submission Name: Remembering the Phoenixdots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsRemembering the Phoenixdots
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                   It is not for mine to say whether
                   this poet is as the skilled surgeon
                   trepanning into his own skull
                   configuring, with his own fingers, the mind.
                   or, what he might do to the face.


         
              or moving down to the soul





    Submitted on 2017-08-09 08:50:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I very much enjoyed this.
    The comparison between the two professions would seem sparse, but I agree that a Poet and a Surgeon are equatable.
    Both need be focused, meticulous, and passionate.
    Great write thanks for sharing :)
    | Posted on 2017-08-12 00:00:00 | by endlessgame23 | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2017-08-09 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]


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