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    dots Submission Name: The Human Harmonicdots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2126/2083/1587
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Human Harmonicdots
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              when you are
              over there

                                                                               so peaceful.






              to commit to you









                                                      * the lucid sentence
                                                      * scratched out of the oxygen



         

         i'd never considered that there were alien ships
         hidden in the clouds
         at their maneuvers
         using the night's lightning as cover





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    boom. mother fuckers.

    | Posted on 2017-08-09 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]


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