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    Author: poetotoe
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 625/444/501
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Don't Stop

    In whispers of dirty secrets in my ear
    let one pretend there is no one there
    love me on these white satin sheets
    in nightly sweats of my delusions.

    It's here where I scream in feign
    my bed of lost love lost dreams
    comfortable as a lovers breast
    wet in a lovers sweat of guilt.

    About to leave me at sunrise
    bathed in sweat and lost tears
    I yell! My love was not enough!
    You never look back, never once.

    Professional curtsy I gave my love
    all I have all want is its return once
    and that was once upon a time in life
    short so sweet I have become use to it.

    Between your whispers, I hear your love
    filling the voids of space and time as one
    I gave my love before you knew my name
    you speak in your whispers that I love you.




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