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    dots Submission Name: Deepdots
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    Author: Janesaddiction
    ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 8/24/16
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDeepdots
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    Dig down
    beneath blemishes
    emptiness
    longing

    Uncover
    truth
    passion
    dreams

    Stopping only
    for one more thrust,
    spade of desire
    deep within




    Submitted on 2017-08-11 12:47:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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