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    dots Submission Name: Beauty Restdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 463
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1452



    Description:
       My days remain as they always have been... Busy - doing what needs to get done. Taking care what and whom needs taken care of... My nights have never been longer.....


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    dotsBeauty Restdots
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    Sleep has never been a luxury
    Not something that is promised only assumed
    For, within the darkness demons awaken
    The monsters of the past come to play hide-n-go-seek
    Never seem to hide well enough

    Stuck within the nightmare all night long
    Rewinding and play it through for days to come

    Appearing as if jaundice – sleep and food depravity does not enter the equation

    Sleep has never been a luxury
    Not something that is promised only assumed
    For, within the darkness demons awaken
    The monsters of the past come to play hide-n-go-seek
    Never seem to hide well enough

    Reduced to the 12-year-old girl once was…
    Aching for that father figure
    Only wanting to be wanted

    Within the darkness lost between fact and fiction
    Between…
    What was and what is

    Sleep has never been a luxury
    Not something that is promised only assumed
    For, within the darkness demons awaken
    The monsters of the past come to play hide-n-go-seek
    Never seem to hide well enough

    Left trembling once awaken
    Living in the present – however, living only in the past – the subconsciousness has the power

    For, within the darkness demons awaken
    The monsters of the past come to play hide-n-go-seek
    Never seem to hide well enough




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