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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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         I wish I knew some profound, shabby old. Character. Then
         I could say. I met him in the tall grass. Perfect for losing things.
         And following him, adopted his manner. Moving from one
         point. and. from that point to another.

         
         There is a way to be traveled for each pain.






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