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    dots Submission Name: Transformationdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 262/107/52
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Transformation a journey.
    Transformation an evolution.

    Transformation a new direction.
    Transformation a new dimension.

    Transformation a new chapter.
    Transformation a new projection.

    Transformation is ceaseless.
    Transformation is timeless.

    Transformation is nonchalance of the mind.
    Transformation is comprehension of the mind.

    Transformation of thoughts.
    Transformation of actions.

    Transformation of life.
    Transformation of world.







    Submitted on 2017-08-14 13:58:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice and apt. Life indeed is all about transformation. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2017-09-07 00:00:00 | by webdevil | [ Reply to This ]
      THe only thing i like about this work was , the how to show, I never relly could of imagine there is a transformation to such ideals, opps' there 's another one, Though it this pile of words rack my brian, i like it in the strangest way,
    Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-08-31 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]


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