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    dots Submission Name: An Acoustic Qualitydots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2121/2079/1562
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAn Acoustic Qualitydots
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         I can't say. Well, my feelings are here. extending
         to ________________
         
         I will say that music, that mechanism is a perfectly cyclical
         machinery. Its whistles. And pops.
         achieving distance.





                                                                &. Out on my walks. the way
    .                                                            the seep of water manages.
                                                                defining the shape and
                                                                space of a cave




                                       The commitment to change
                                       drip and rock hold Together.




                                                                          There is revelation. Only
                                                                                         frequency.









         The sending station.           The receiving stations

         
    taking up with others.





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                                                 a worsening effect







    | Posted on 2017-08-16 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]
      


                             i am not special: but in the way that water
                             has found to fill the cracks of my fingers
                             identifying me


         

                        I wanted you to come along
                        and tell me this
                        was an Opus of words.





    | Posted on 2017-08-14 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]


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