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Author:	Daniel Barlow
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     I can't say. Well, my feelings are here. extending
     to ________________

     I will say that music, that mechanism is a perfectly cyclical
     machinery. Its whistles. And pops.
     achieving distance.

                                                            &. Out on my walks. the way
.                                                            the seep of water manages.
                                                            defining the shape and
                                                            space of a cave

                                   The commitment to change
                                   drip and rock hold Together.

                                                                      There is revelation. Only
                                                                                     frequency.

     The sending station.           The receiving stations

taking up with others.

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                                             a worsening effect

| Posted on 2017-08-16 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]


                         i am not special: but in the way that water
                         has found to fill the cracks of my fingers
                         identifying me



                    I wanted you to come along
                    and tell me this
                    was an Opus of words.

| Posted on 2017-08-14 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.