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Daniel Barlow
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I can't say. Well, my feelings are here. extending
to ________________
I will say that music, that mechanism is a perfectly cyclical
machinery. Its whistles. And pops.
achieving distance.
&. Out on my walks. the way
. the seep of water manages.
defining the shape and
space of a cave
The commitment to change
drip and rock hold
Together.
There is revelation.
Only
frequency.
The sending station. The receiving stations
taking up with others.
Submitted on 2017-08-14 13:59:40
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a worsening effect
| Posted on 2017-08-16 00:00:00 | by
thesunbird
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i am not special: but in the way that water
has found to fill the cracks of my fingers
identifying me
I wanted you to come along
and tell me
this
was an O
p
us of wor
ds.
| Posted on 2017-08-14 00:00:00 | by
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