Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2126/2084/1587
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 511
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1285



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsdots
    -------------------------------------------



                                       i am not special, but in the way that water
                                       has found to fill the cracks of my fingers
                                       identifying me

         

                        I wanted you to come along
                        and tell me this
                        was an Opus of words.





    Submitted on 2017-08-15 13:43:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      To figure that I, was look at fingers of water,; in my minds eye, THis is a delight to read, very visual .
    Teika5 says , take me on that ride.
    | Posted on 2017-08-29 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201912

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Summer written by layDsayD
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Linger written by saartha
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    This written by Chelebel
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Whiteout written by layDsayD

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry