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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2126/2084/1587
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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                                       i am not special, but in the way that water
                                       has found to fill the cracks of my fingers
                                       identifying me

         

                        I wanted you to come along
                        and tell me this
                        was an Opus of words.





    Submitted on 2017-08-15 13:43:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      To figure that I, was look at fingers of water,; in my minds eye, THis is a delight to read, very visual .
    Teika5 says , take me on that ride.
    | Posted on 2017-08-29 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]


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