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Author:	ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:	20, Male
Elite Ratio:	0.49 - 5/120/134
Words:	102

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	995
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So many words left on my tongue
So many screams saved in my lungs

So many tears fought on my cheek
So many drops of blood spilled from this geek

So many gaps my legs didn't make
So many bridges that my heart had to break

So many sights my eyes were forced to see
So many voices told who i was supposed to be

So many houses that i filled with space
So many roads left behind without a trace

So many people i wish i still had
So many reasons why i've gotten this bad

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At least you're honest.
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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