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Submission Name:
Meaningless Meanings
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Author:
ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:
20, Male
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102
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Poetry/Misc
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Meaningless Meanings
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So many words left on my tongue
So many screams saved in my lungs
So many tears fought on my cheek
So many drops of blood spilled from this geek
So many gaps my legs didn't make
So many bridges that my heart had to break
So many sights my eyes were forced to see
So many voices told who i was supposed to be
So many houses that i filled with space
So many roads left behind without a trace
So many people i wish i still had
So many reasons why i've gotten this bad
Submitted on 2017-08-21 01:27:06
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