Meaningless Meanings

Author: ForgottenGraves ASL Info:    20, Male Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135 Words: 102

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Meaningless Meanings

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So many words left on my tongue So many screams saved in my lungs So many tears fought on my cheek So many drops of blood spilled from this geek So many gaps my legs didn't make So many bridges that my heart had to break So many sights my eyes were forced to see So many voices told who i was supposed to be So many houses that i filled with space So many roads left behind without a trace So many people i wish i still had So many reasons why i've gotten this bad

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At least you're honest.

| Posted on 2017-08-26 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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