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    dots Submission Name: Meaningless Meaningsdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMeaningless Meaningsdots

    So many words left on my tongue
    So many screams saved in my lungs

    So many tears fought on my cheek
    So many drops of blood spilled from this geek

    So many gaps my legs didn't make
    So many bridges that my heart had to break

    So many sights my eyes were forced to see
    So many voices told who i was supposed to be

    So many houses that i filled with space
    So many roads left behind without a trace

    So many people i wish i still had
    So many reasons why i've gotten this bad

    Submitted on 2017-08-21 01:27:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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