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    dots Submission Name: Live In Between dots
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    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ artesia ca
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 38/9/16
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       I wanted to start a question of the world , so many what tha's and not enough ways to answer the why's


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    dotsLive In Between dots
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    some say , some went ,<then gone>
    how many has the cause ,too
    , with a banner to fly
    and/ a / fire to quince

    as the T.V. / it rings the lie of days
    my daze continues
    till the next broadcast

    hate , love of hate , and the why
    what was missing ,ah..
    that would of been me
    questioning in the <why>

    another death , another death
    too, And the I questioning of the ,<what>

    am i suppose to answer AT ALL
    or is this really the way to the end




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