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    dots Submission Name: Johnny's Cockdots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28/42/44
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 972
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1187



    Description:
       An afternoon of too many Lifetime's...

    (movies)


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    dotsJohnny's Cockdots
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    My friends see my lips
    raw, swollen, bleeding
    pale skin scabbed and bruised.
    They call him a vile demon, say
    he can't be trusted, he's feeding
    you nothing but lies and abuse.
    Starving you of Love and affection.
    You're his RealDoll for real, Dahl.
    Can't you see you're being used?
    Forget him, regret him, you're better
    off without him, Honey, please,
    Get off those broken knees!

    But They don't know him
    like I do; so well. So swell
    when he ain't at the bottom
    of that fucking vodka well.
    He's the Beast and I'm his Belle.
    A little uncouth, but what the Hell.
    He's pretty and big and pretty big!
    What more could a girl ask for?
    They don't know what it feels like
    to make Johnny smile, to hear his sigh
    when you're kissing and nibbling
    his neck, naval, and thigh.
    They've no idea what I plan
    while I'm sucking his cock.
    How one of these days
    I'm going to choke and
    bite it off.




    Submitted on 2017-08-22 23:23:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Bringing it- I just enjoyed a word orgasm your rhyming was so brite. That right there is a beast.
    | Posted on 2017-08-23 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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