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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2126/2084/1587
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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              and still there is momentum
              a balance against.
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              how i envy the person with the
              wherewithal to crumple
              hammering the ground with
              his fists.
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              it's been a while since i have lost
              it like that
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              whatever is happening in the city
              today cannot be that bad
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              Quiet you could take a shotgun to
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              Superman puts his arm around Lois
              Lane. and i feel as if i should walk
              over to them
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              but i am not the good guy.







    Submitted on 2017-08-23 15:20:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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              what happens to the magnet
              after you wrench it
              away from the metal
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              is it soulless as it lies there












    | Posted on 2017-08-29 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]
      




              how can
              it be




              you find something so on point

         

              when you are off grid









    | Posted on 2017-08-23 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]
      



         Sometimes i think of the things that i have written
         that seem. that are.

















                                  a story / a story






















         like
         cave paintings situated alongside
         one another








         








                                                                           Only
                                                  separated by millennia






    | Posted on 2017-08-23 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]


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