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Daniel Barlow
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Maria. I have wanted you.
* throwing out algorithms.
* so tactile
the fevered ridges of your skin
i thought nothing could smooth
Submitted on 2017-08-24 22:49:25
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THe paper is all southing and stuff, it feels in the eyes . ta blank must of been what i wanted to here,lol Teika5
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