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    dots Submission Name: None the Wiserdots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 353
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 1186
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2016



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       I suppose ignorance is bliss


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    dotsNone the Wiserdots
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    Force fed factory farms
    hormonal cattle eating each other
    That is, if the flesh is real
    you dinner could be...
    Genetically
    Modified
    Veal

    pill popping hypochondriacs
    off to the Doctor by the droves
    but it's not all our fault
    It's a fact that
    we've been sold the disease
    as the remedies
    to our woes

    none the wiser
    none the wiser

    False flags raised to the Skies
    A grey garden of seeded clouds
    Tempest in the making as an
    Orchestra of Angels
    strum the haarps of Heaven
    and the stars fall to Eden
    Celestial silence breaking
    our lives for the taking

    none the wiser
    none the wiser

    Archons of the Shadows
    Demons of Hell
    Aliens from Space
    [i]A rose by any other name[/i]
    still smells like sulfur
    They buy our faces, our freedom
    with a ticket of 15 minute fame
    put us in the lime light, basking
    while They siphon all We are
    into all They'll never be
    but who's to blame
    when we served ourselves to them
    begging for it, eagerly asking
    for the fortune, for the shame
    of being a Celebrity God
    oops I mean pawn
    in a game already won

    none the wiser
    none the wiser

    God made us in 6 [i]days[/i]...
    and left us on the Seventh
    I watched him walk away
    as We cried out in confusion
    buried beneath our abandonment
    we turned from the Light within
    to the Darkness without
    seeking a Father who never
    gave one good God damn
    about the Life he made

    none the wiser
    none the wiser

    And, I, a silhouette behind the veil
    quietly watching, wishing
    I was none the wiser




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