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    dots Submission Name: A bit of Paindots

    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ artesia ca
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 38/9/16
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       It's a silly affair to be with burning lights , that flicker a truth no one hears.

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    dotsA bit of Paindots

    A , Dash of this moment;then the here after. As an electric blade
    cuts soul energy , to satisfy Hell's jealously for the Night Games.
    "Set's" play for rites as a war machine toils! A dash of cold , for purely
    crass-sing in a deceitful play of death ; with no proof. No, none to speak of at least . Unless you would like to be presented to a physic-evil; In any case you will lose. See, these things are of Satin and reserved
    For rendering souls.

    a bit of pain , /to smudge a day away
    A dash of cold , for the anxis of it all
    Dollar for Dollar
    It's not a bad price for pain .

    A bit of this pain
    to complete a shit list
    in flame

    crass your neighbor
    The'll do the same
    to hate your passing
    and love your blood <too>
    Till they both run cold
    the game is that of the same
    Colored with street light
    with the ends of the truth
    the ends of the truth

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      Truth can be painful.
    Pain can be cleansing
    through pain reborn
    unto Heaven's blessing.

    rise above hate and love thy neighbor.
    The truth is, Love.

    | Posted on 2017-08-29 00:00:00 | by endlessgame23 | [ Reply to This ]

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