Not the Devil, but the Wind

Author: endlessgame23 ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28 /42 /44 Words: 150

Class/Type: Poetry /Death Total Views: 2446 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 982

Description:

---

Not the Devil, but the Wind

---

It was the wind through her hair, how her smile said she didn't care It was the cool breeze and how she looked so fragile down there on her little knees It was the wind whispering sins come along again Beautiful Wild Let me feel you from within It was the wind breathing life into the embers of the last dying star the awful wicked temptation tormenting my fractured souls It was the wind dancing through the leaves sunlight peeking through the shadows a little play of light and dark upon her face as we sat beneath the bows of her favorite willow tree that became her grave I didn't mean to..

Submitted on 2017-08-27 11:26:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_< 2: I dunno... 3: meh! 4: Pretty cool 5: Wow!

Comments

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest. 2. Try not to give only compliments. 3. How did it make you feel? 4. Why did it make you feel that way? 5. Which parts? 6. What distracted from the piece?

7. What was unclear? 8. What does it remind you of? 9. How could it be improved? 10. What would you have done differently? 11. What was your interpretation of it? 12. Does it feel original?

201935