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Starseed


Author: endlessgame23
ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28 /42 /44
Words: 84
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Starseed



Seven thousand years
is a long time to be Human
The days go one forever
as they pass by so fast
Nothing seems to last

Seven.. thousand.. years
on Earth
living in this mess
they left behind
who would've guessed?
Betrayed by my own kind

After...
seven thousand years
The day has arrived
Brothers hear me
Lovers fear me
I am Ascending
I have arrived




Submitted on 2017-08-27 11:28:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  true that, what the hell have we found ourselves with. All thousand years
of lies and force truth, to arrive where a bomb hit our living space. Like it is said transformation by destruction , It will part of the sights , for all those to know , all those resentments you and i will know, the World will know , and it will end, OH ya , it will End!
Teika5
| Posted on 2017-08-29 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]


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