Starseed

Author: endlessgame23 ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28 /42 /44 Words: 84

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Starseed

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Seven thousand years is a long time to be Human The days go one forever as they pass by so fast Nothing seems to last Seven.. thousand.. years on Earth living in this mess they left behind who would've guessed? Betrayed by my own kind After... seven thousand years The day has arrived Brothers hear me Lovers fear me I am Ascending I have arrived

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true that, what the hell have we found ourselves with. All thousand years of lies and force truth, to arrive where a bomb hit our living space. Like it is said transformation by destruction , It will part of the sights , for all those to know , all those resentments you and i will know, the World will know , and it will end, OH ya , it will End! Teika5

| Posted on 2017-08-29 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]

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