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Author:	kyserin
ASL Info:	30's/Female/ohio
Elite Ratio:	3.67 - 44/25/52
Words:	121

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
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FamiliarDemons ©™

Demons screaming inside
It's exhausting living in ones mind
You never speak a word they say
But your mind is so loud

You are damaged, you are broken
You're afraid,
we are the ones Standing at the ready , no need for shame

We don't judge, we sit and whisper
Thoughts in and out , still silent
No need for doubt

We are here , we are comfort
Endless tears , unhealed sorrows
Darkness Consuming but you've
Nothing to Fear

We'll take it away , leave it behind
We demons promise to ease one's mind , anther day passes , We by your side ,Emapthy with no bounds
No will To Die

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Sometimes our Demons are the only things that we can rely on.

It is our past that shapes our futures, molding us.

This is my first comment.

We are here , we are comfort
Endless tears , unhealed sorrows
Darkness Consuming but you've
Nothing to Fear

I feel like after "nothing to fear" the flow is kind of missing something. I can not suggest any thing to add though as it still works in its own way.

Really good and I hope this message finds you well.
| Posted on 2017-10-19 00:00:00 | by Mepoduo | [ Reply to This ]

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