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    dots Submission Name: Arrow & AfterShockdots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2121/2077/1562
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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         &. we are the source
         The Ingot.
         the sun stone skips its light off of

         
                                                                               for miles out


                                            collateral damage
                                            batoned back.


              from
              the anomaly







    Submitted on 2017-08-30 14:24:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    We, are the city



















    | Posted on 2017-08-30 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]
      
       From wing tip
                                                                          to wing tip



                                  faking it
                                            making it
           taking


    it
         
                                                      to turbulence


    | Posted on 2017-08-30 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]
      








              and i sit down a bit
              smile a bit
              look down a time
              slip down in my booth
              a bit like
              the guy

         

                                                 who
                                                 has gotten
                                                 that out in one breath




    | Posted on 2017-08-30 00:00:00 | by thesunbird | [ Reply to This ]


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