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    dots Submission Name: In a Cornerdots

    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsIn a Cornerdots

    All these years
    New and old
    Time has taken back
    All we cannot hold
    All we cannot keep
    But what was lost
    Like a fossil, stayed
    Became one in another
    Like white in a play of color
    I descend,
    into the background

    If I could, slow down
    Feel my heart beat one more time
    Let the wind touch my face
    To realize, the corner of this world
    I dread so much
    Is sky,
    white, blue and endless
    I will live.

    To love, whose absence
    left us in continuous drift,
    I say, "come".
    For all that was taken,
    and missed
    Is here, always
    In a corner.

    Submitted on 2017-09-02 07:15:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      carved like some ancient mammoth's ivory
    Long since buried in the effluvium
    Of everyday life
    You thought you had lost it
    Then one day you pick it up
    Dust it off with catch of breath
    And you realize Wow
    It's love
    | Posted on 2017-09-02 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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