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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.7 - 44/24/52
    Words: 1197
    Class/Type: Story/Dark
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       Description : “ I had a horrible horrific dream that I’m trying not to recall but the events that took place are solid within my mind. .... the world is a scary place , trust no one but whose close to you , killers lurker anywhere , waiting for abduction, rape , murder or worse ..... I tend to have out of body dreams and get placed in the hot seat of the victims. ....


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    By Kat Rome ~ Wednesday, September 6, 2017

    Description : “ I had a horrible horrific dream that I’m trying not to recall but the events that took place are solid within my mind. .... the world is a scary place , trust no one but whose close to you , killers lurker anywhere , waiting for abduction, rape , murder or worse ..... I tend to have out of body dreams and get placed in the hot seat of the victims. ....

    “ My Story Goes Like this , “
    A young mother decided she wanted to go visit her Family and stay the week at her mothers , She ended up having a medical emergency No one in the family wanted to help her , She was fighting with her ex husband about seeing their only son , this man made up lie’s straight to her face on why his child was important, But all the man wanted to Do spend time with the whore he left her for but she left him before he could leave her. .... She ends up screaming in his face and hitting him , he doesn't flinch Nore does he even care one bit .... he had a load of furniture in his truck and tosses it out in front of her mother's house and leaves with out even a glance back at her ..... She left her phone in the house it was on the charge , the only way she could talk to her husband was through the wifi .... She knew the hospital was close but didn't know where { So she got this thought maybe I can Walk there } .... So She decided to walk about and find it if no one cared...her child was safe ......he was playing upstairs , She wouldn't be missed { no one cares at all } ..... all she kept thinking about was telling her lover about the horrid day she was having & telling him how much she missed him , Til things Sour & Went down a dark path .... She makes to the hospital. ...its packed full , hours & hours pass by And she's still asking for help ..... She gets a quick look at And Once again Shes blowed off. ... “ I don’t have time for this , She say’s to herself “ and decides to leave ..... She began to walk outside to the end of the drive , falls down and starts to cry “ my life seems hopeless why do I try “ , two cars seem to be passing by , One pulls over to her side the man gets out to willing to help , This alerts her and she says { i dont need help }
    “ I don’t know you “,” I have to be going now “ she wave’s bye “....The second car pulls up ready to admit someone needing help ,They are busy she say’s , I couldn't even get help “she say’s in the distance then points to the patch on her face covering her infliction , She start’s heading back to the home of her mothers but gets lost , it’s starting to get dark , there’s buildings and alleys and people walking around , It seems like there’s even a carnival in town ... She pass’s food stands And her stomach starts to grumble but she has not money so she moves on .... people look and stare making rude comments with out care ..... she passed by a man talking loudly by a market stand { she began to over hear dark things about abduction as she passed near , she really wasn't trying to ease drop let alone hear } it was about a girl dressed in black she took care of rosters and chickens in the back of the barn by a Small shed .....So She began To seek this Girl out , So She Began to run off looking for this girl maybe to warn her the nightmare ahead passing by more rides and food stalls .....finally seeing the barns that lay ahead there was one more ride to pass but blocking the path a group girls stood and gossiping in front of the fairis wheel ride , she rushes past them , one makes a rude remark , she turns around give her the middle finder with out any thought , Onward she goes finally seeing the shed .... praying that the girl she herd about isn't already dead ..... she goes up to her , she was hard to miss , playing with the chickens covered in a mess , She carries on a conversation but the girl already knows about the abduction and doesn't give Her a second glance , The girl goes back to lopping a head off a chicken and that’s where They parted , She started off by running towards some fields seeing the near by house’s that had to be the area , the image of Her mothers house became so clear ....
    She came across some train tracks then walked along besides a bar ,She Began to hear a car as if it we’re stalking her Near by , As She walked alone in the darkness , She started looking for place’s Of Safety , She came across a building with a Old metal ladder And decided to hide of the roof .....She began to hear a cars engine halt to stop , then car doors open , She Noticed She was in a really tough spot with no hope to cling onto ..... She clung to A pillar that was out of view .... { She began to hear a voice sounding to familiar “ she can’t have gotten far “ }
    Anther voice speaks up , “I’ll look over here “ { I’ll check this building ,maybe she climbed up here “ } She began to get Frantic and worry rushed over her , As the nightmare filled Her head , If they catch me I’ll be dead .... Why are they after me ?? , She began to wonder , was that girl a decoy ? To Catch The Concerning Off Guard and Unaware ? It was a trap and the kindness was my fall , It Had been way to Obvious She Already knew it all ...... A second later a head appears above the ladder She try’s to kick them off But ended up missing and takes a slip before dashing off , She Hear’s the guy mumble “ oh there you are , you remember me ? “ You Did not give me the time of day back there “ how nice of you to fall in our trap this way .....
    She took tail and begins to run , searching for an exit , there has to be one .... she’s all alone and no where to hide this is where I wake up and leave her I’m guessing she died ......




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