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    dots Submission Name: Your Final Frontier: My Favorite Cardigandots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsYour Final Frontier: My Favorite Cardigandots
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    The Universe has been worn down.
    It's intricate hem frayed all around.
    I have fingered the holes.
    The strings have been pulled.
    Unraveling the fabric of existence.




    Submitted on 2017-09-14 20:53:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Have you ever looked at the intricasy of a knit sweater...or for that matter...any kind of woven cloth? Line after line of intertwined threads - crissing and crossing each other. They seem like they go on forever...it boggles the mind of the precision needed to align such things into a pattern - something useable...like a cardigan.

    Since sci-fi is by far my favorite book/film genre, you get high marks for this comparison. Interestingly enough, I have been reading a lot lately on gravity...such a simple thing...but not easily explained. It is just one of the "threads" in the fabric of our Universe. Unravel it...and I wonder what wonders we could discover?

    Oh...hopefully your cardigan can be fixed. Getting to be that time of year for warm clothing...

    Thanks for sharing!

    Kelly
    | Posted on 2017-09-15 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ominous, but wouldn't the trick be to weave the fabric of existence? Hum, perhaps your right maybe to untie the laws of physics could be a boon. Deep questions that must be pondered!
    | Posted on 2017-09-14 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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