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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 180/107/54
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    I think I'll keep you
    Peddling with your last gusts of energy
    Eyes focused on the distance
    (cast away and translucent
    heavy with a passion
    that drips with blase envy)

    It wouldn't do to expose my heart
    but you can stay in the
    comparment and peddle along
    (they all eventually lose energy and momentum
    and give way to the chaos of the universe
    just as dust floats along in space)

    I watch them from time to time,
    just as I look at you now, a slight glace of the eye,
    soaking in the warmth of the four walls that hold you in
    and the two empty space you've fancied into guillotines

    Sweet tastes the sweat and the concentration,
    the adoration in your veins as it travels your entire
    body with each peddle and settles into your palms

    (I can sense you lose your energy and
    your hands and feet fatigue, but nonetheless
    I think I'll keep you)




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